April 19

100wc week #28?

I woke up to the sudden creak of the floor board

I sat bolt upright as i realized there where hundreds of figures walking through my room and into the wall on the other side.

The figures did not flinch when i screamed then i realized my voice was gone i was screeming my head off…

i pinched myself and i did not feel it….

I did not wake up…

I stuffed my head under my pillow…

And woke up in the pitch black… with an ominous glow coming from the door of my room

Slowly walked to the door and peeked through…



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Posted April 19, 2017 by tiia2014 in category Uncategorized

4 thoughts on “100wc week #28?

  1. libby2016

    What happened next? You left me hanging. Beautifully written, grabbing the reader’s attention right from the start and leaving us on the edge of our seats. Make sure you proof read your work and get someone else to read over it too to pick up spelling and grammar errors before publishing.

  2. bridget

    I liked this piece as it was exiting and left me on the edge of my seat. But you could work on your spelling and grammar even though you think it is cool and interesting. You could also work on adding the prompt because I had no idea what you were writing about. But over all it was a really interesting piece of writing.


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